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Rocky Mountains by Stephanie

Posted by MsMichetti on 21 May 2009




Submission for SPACE by Stephanie in Hanoi, Vietnam:

 

Rocky Mountains

Written on the 29th of April 2009 and edited on the 1st of May

 

Towering and great with height,

The rocks trying to scare me,

I try to gather courage to climb,

Scaling up the cliff,

Trying not to look below,

At last reaching the top.

 

Now gazing below,

Of what I’ve achieved,

Of where I did go.

 

Climbing back down,

Feeling so tired,

I stare at the mountain,

Knowing it was never trying to scare me,

Never trying to kill me,

But just sitting their so it was all I could see,

So it was there towering over me.

 

**If you’re not sure why this poem is here, read this post.

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One Response to “Rocky Mountains by Stephanie”

  1.   Radhika Says:
    June 20th, 2009 at 11:08 pm

    Very well expressed. For a person that is so used to writing a lot, this seems very simple, yet you’ve chosen your words well. Its nice that you’ve chosen to write about something you love to do so much. It was well-written. Be proud :)

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