Rocky Mountains by Stephanie
Posted by MsMichetti on 21 May 2009
Submission for SPACE by Stephanie in Hanoi, Vietnam:
Rocky Mountains
Written on the 29th of April 2009 and edited on the 1st of May
Towering and great with height,
The rocks trying to scare me,
I try to gather courage to climb,
Scaling up the cliff,
Trying not to look below,
At last reaching the top.
Now gazing below,
Of what I’ve achieved,
Of where I did go.
Climbing back down,
Feeling so tired,
I stare at the mountain,
Knowing it was never trying to scare me,
Never trying to kill me,
But just sitting their so it was all I could see,
So it was there towering over me.
**If you’re not sure why this poem is here, read this post.
June 20th, 2009 at 11:08 pm
Very well expressed. For a person that is so used to writing a lot, this seems very simple, yet you’ve chosen your words well. Its nice that you’ve chosen to write about something you love to do so much. It was well-written. Be proud